← Session 38 — Paper A final wording + freeze for expert review
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Compile clean: 13 pages, zero overfull boxes, no undefined refs (the grep -i "undefined" returned nothing — output shows nothing between the 0 count and end).
Both changes done. Report concisely. Also flag the first abstract occurrence as an optional consistency item.
Both changes in, compile clean — 13 pages, zero overfull boxes, no undefined refs.
**1. Abstract** (paperA.tex:50-53): now reads
> "...Johansson's rigorous Keiper-coefficient table to $10^5$ transferred to the Li normalization, a zero-location certificate..."
I dropped the internal comma after "$10^5$" from your draft — inside a comma-separated list it read like a separate item. Say the word if you want it back.
**2. Step 3** (paperA.tex:262): now reads
> "...the count majorized at $T_n$); all other contour terms are independent of the finite-height RH assumption."
Also removed the `\emph{}` — the narrower phrasing carries its own weight.
One adjacent spot you may want to look at: the abstract's earlier sentence still says "finite Li-coefficient computations (Johansson's rigorous table to $10^5$ and this project's to $3000$)". Strictly, Johansson's table is Keiper-normalized there too. With your new clause now in the same abstract, a referee gets the precision from context — but I can tighten it if you want full consistency.
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